All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 06'

I love magic and mythology ...

Of course my great grand daddy was Merlin! ! ! ! I wish ....

Totally awesome story ... loving it.

please just leave it romantic... I want to read more of their love

God,vanalas u can change...How baby luis has changed was cute,i love him/u..Oh those sweet words.The confession scene...Oh God,I LOVE IT,how baby Aid has reacted..God mwaaaah

so Aid is supernatural!!!!,lyk avatar,i love him

oh the whole family scenes

That kneeling part infront of Aid.God i love it,vanalas has some one ever told u u genius???,well u're my king..U're creativity is above us.Thank u dear

God,i love u even more

Ya,Aid and luis are finally together in aromantic way,so time to challenge S.F.L but be stronger coz,that was so romantic,so prove us that luis is better than nick

oh the Aid's powers hit luis???,i thought it was the priest,Oh van

plz whats that ,that is coming??Atleast let it leave us to enjoy love for some tym,am panicking..Ar they watched???

The theme song is i call it love by lionel richie

van u da best/king himself so bring ln more love intimately

goodnyt,my King

hello,my vanalas/king himself

i hope ur good my king...I'l always appreciate u van

guys am worried"what they didnt kno was....."are Aid and Luis safe????

God am stressed.This king vanalas is unpredictable..Sure can any of u guess whats coming???God,no

haha,The prince's ways ar mwaaaah...This Luidans are also BRILLIANT!!!!

Adrianick VS Luiden,this time..hohoh

This is a 2 chapter, 15 page story, that you clumsily dragged out into way too many chapters.

Also you seriously need an editor and proofreader.

Like the basic story, just not the execution.

anon,what do u mean???the story has 6 chapters not 2

so may be u're also confused???

Let us enjoy our story plz,u're not the writer

i wana learn how to nominate..And i'll give out his name to be nominated

Hola, como estas lovely readers. Just checking up on you. so much love for u guys. love you like kilado. just wanted to tell u that I have posted three more chapters for you today. hopefully, the admin will post them soon okay. Gracias mi amor.

oh thanks van..Am really excited..U're back again???I love u my van/king himself

am u mexican???

Hahahaha,is that latino language??God,its amazing

fuck,am going in exams,that means i'l delay in reading my lovely story,God nothing can stop me from reading,I SWEAR MY KING

I agree with anon this story has been drawn out longer than necessary, mainly due to a huge amount of repetitive story lines...most being about how they hated each other, ok we get it they hate each other no need to be a broken record and repeat that over and over AND OVER.....

The story itself is interesting but please get an editor or at least proofread before posting.

how's the story long???Did u expect them to fall in love at first chapter????Besides,

there are many other things important we needed to know,arent them there???

what wud u lyk the story to be??So brief???

Then that's not astory but apoem,,,oh am going to school dont destroy ma mood,am happy luidans ar together so plz,advise or...anyway, thats u

i wud lyk to see luis dancing,yeah with Aid..Break dance,hahahahaha..Vanalas am gona mis u till i come back

cant wait next chapter please