All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
pls van don't hurt aidan

Pls,pls van don't hurt aidan and since he's powerful and all, he should be able to conceive

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
Definately that was not the end,but my Aidan???

Oh God i lyked how my Aidan saved the scepter,the love making scene...Oh those moans,i wanted to be there being f..... u know,hahahahaha.I love them

But now am scared,i asked for tension forgetting that am asking the king of it,sure van am scared..But let them hurt my lovely couple i beg u,

basing on the priest,for sure trouble is coming,but what's its effect???God that scare me big time

but plz,those didnt get enough,now let Aid be tougher,hehe let him use the four elements

plz my luis will be hurt if Aid gets an injury..I fucking hate that william,chiii but let him come

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

dont hurt them van,am stressed van i even make mistakes in my comments

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Its action tym so yeah.........We've tied the knots bring it on my king..Its time we be confident

surely luis wana challenge nick but lets See,i've something am waiting,,so u show it and i'l see,hehehe challenge my king

the theme song is drunk in love by beyonce,i cant wait for chapter..Post soon,we love u,but I LOVE U MOST THAN MORE

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Allow me to read again/every page but the scepter theory and love making theme more]

i appreciate the time u put in to get the best for us,thank u for always being innovative just to entertain us

may our Lord guide u and strengthen both our love and yos in our luxuriant stories

missed u van ALOT,KING HIMSELF

BE HAPPY and [post soon],i Love adore and respect u

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Should Aid tell luis,???Am scared hiding the truth may annoy our baby[second vanalas hahaha,well to me ofcourse]

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