All Comments on 'Unbundling Tamara'

What a beautiful story. It was lovely seeing Tammy emerge and always great to read of sex not ending once the man has cum! 5 easy stars!

Very well done. Sensitive. Creative. Erotic. All in a skillfully done manner. A wonderful romance that tugged at the heart strings. A perfect way to show how true love can develop between two people. Thanks! K

What a thoughtfully written and absolutely excellent story. Well done!

Great character development and slow backstory reveal. Wonderful to see the wounds heal, though they don’t always do so so easily even once that process starts.

Nicely done. Great plot, characters, internal and external dialogue, descriptions, and sex scenes. Tammy's unbundling herself with Mard's help was gracefully done. The proposal scene fits the plot and slowly leads to the consummation of the relationship. I always like a happy ever after story. I almost forgot, your writing ability and style are excellent and, thus the story easy to read.

Wonderful combination of characterization, plot, and steamy sex. Loved the way the layers of Tammy/Tam were peeled back throughout the story, and of course how it ended. Bravo, PickFiction!

Nice premise.

But too much 'story' and not eough details with the sex. Needed to be more step-by-step. Cock immediately into mouth isn't very erotic. Needs lots more teasing and playing before sexual activities beyond that.

On page 2 it's a cherry pie. On page 3 it's become an apple pie.

Four stars.

Very well done, I really thought you developed the characters well

I would have liked to have read of the reaction at work but then I’m greedy, 5 stars, thanks

Did not like the bitch Tammy character!!!

So 1*