by Mark2
I like the start, and even more the title that ends with Chapter1. Keep it up. It got me up.
Do keep going, slower buildups often make more entertaining stories
very nice build up cant wait to hear more, brings back some old memories
I like the way this story is starting, can't wait to read the rest.
I came in my pants--TWICE--before I was even half-way through it. So, I had to wait awhile before I could finish it. Thank you.