All Comments on 'Uncaged Ch. 04'

Jade is taking this too far, I think she should be able to say no when she wants to without being put down by jade or anyone else,

Love this story.

Your writing really turned me on

Sorry for the low score but even the barest mention of a male (Ben) is a major NO-NO in the lesbian story category! Ugh.

Despite what a couple of others have raised as to what they think are negatives with this chapter I think you have done a great job conveying this fantasy in a realistic way. Well done again with the writing. People who had previously told you that you should write were indeed correct based on what you have submitted up to this chapter.