All Comments on 'Unchained Fantasy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A win-win for everyone

This erotic story flows well and is extremely well written. I found myself reading it several times, especially the encounter between Aaron and Karyn with Brooke watching. Stimulates fantasies for both men and women. It certainly did mine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Beautiful!

Wonderfully erotic and superbly written. Well done! Please submit more or your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Perfect!

Nothing more to be said. Just perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
What a Story!

I'm still hyperventilating. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great Story!

Well written and believable. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow!

My husband and I just discovered this author. Splendid work. Sexy storytelling at its very best. Five stars!

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Just a guy who likes to write..........I was born at a very early age but didn’t develop an interest in writing until much later. I began writing fiction in high school and briefly considered a career as a journalist or freelance writer before life steered me in a different di...