All Comments on 'Uncle Bart Visits'

by notnice66

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent !

One of the few stories I really liked because I believe it to be true . You wrote with complete honesty and without exaggeration , can't wait to read more of your work .

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Only.....

Only if they would leave the 'garbage' off of here.!! What teenager wrote this crapo.?????

i8mym8i8mym8over 14 years ago
good erotic tension

liked the way you handled the age difference and the niece having her first anal experience; would have liked her to go A to M

westwalesmanwestwalesmanover 14 years ago
great

it's fiction though I think notnice66 uses her own personal experience to lend versimilitude to the story 3 years since her last submission-far too long

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Welcome back!

after so long you have come back with a vengeance AND tenderness. this is a moving story indeed. Please give us MORE and SOON!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
So Hot

I dislike anal sex mostly but your story turned me on and made me so wet i came big time.

unicorn64unicorn64almost 11 years ago

Is there going to be more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Try rewriting it over

You need to learn how to rewrite a story and leave out these fancy words. It just made me stop reading it.

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demure in public and bad nasty slutty girl in private (btw, pic is not me but similar) I've written some stories, so please take time to read one http://bdsmtest.org/r/xLKKzJb9 https://dirtycode.io/HISCU