All Comments on 'Uncle Bob Ch. 01'

I can't wait to read chapter 2. I enjoyed reading this chapter, it is one of the best.

Love this type of story and can't wait for more. I can see lots of episodes. Since my favorite kink is spanking, I'd love to see Uncle Bob teach her about anal and discover her submissive side and curiousity about bdsm.

Maybe she snoops and finds his spanking videos and gets caught and playfully punished?

Anyway, loved the story and keep up the good work.

Well well mon ami after the long slow build up that you gave us with "Another Way" you certainly didn't beat about the bush with this one.<br>

Right at the top of the story 'barely legal' teen-girl catches her uncle watching porn and beating his meat...<br> There is only one way an opening like that can go.<br>

I think you played the moral dilemma card well but once the testosterone started to take hold of our hero all moral objections went straight out of the window. The post orgasmic moment of doubt rang very true as well. The important thing was you didn't rush your narrative. Yes, it was bang! Straight into the action, but your use of Bob's memories of Stacey as a little girl, her parents divorce etc. Helped to moderate the pace.<br>

A minor niggle, there is always one isn't there. I felt the way you voiced Stacey was just a touch too 'Hollywood Teen Princess' But then, that kind of voice, that kind of 'teen speak' does grate on me anyway. So maybe you did get it spot on.<br>

Overall an excellent portrayal of a Dirty Old Man's favourite fantasy. Very well done!<br>

Dont be slow in comming forward with part 2<br>

Tom D

It was sensational ...you did a great job with detail and kept it authentic and that's what makes it even better .

I loved the warmth and humour in your story. You have a good way with words and a funny turn of phrase.

I'll be reading chapter 2 as soon as I've finished writing this to see what happens next.

pretty freakin hot!

The story pulls you in instantly. The well developed characters hold you there. I found it hard to put down. The rest of my comments I will hold until the last one. Great job!

This was brilliant. Well written, with humour, and hot as hell.

Thank you.

Very hot and nasty! Love it. ;-)

hot story, loved it. where do they go from here? there are many possibilities and all of them hot and sexy.

In Australia it is quite legal for an Uncle and Niece to have a relationship same for Aunt/Nephew.

well that was fantastic, I don't know how you can do better, but I see there are 2 & 3 so we can only hope there are more of that sexy little tease....

Fun!

Greatest Uncle-Niece Fuck Story I've ever read! Sort of wish I was her Uncle!!

Absolutely beautiful UNCLE-NIECE SEX ADVENTURE!!