All Comments on 'Uncle Gus and the Slip-n-Slide'

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it sounds like rape of a mentally challenged 12 year old rather than an 18 year old anyone that would believe an 18 year old would not know what an orgasm or that a hard on or that someone was trying to fuck her and use her body to lube up with would either have to be retarded or just plain stupid you need to stop writing

Basically the plot to a scene with Tiffany holiday, its an old scene with Randy savage and has way to much over acting.

obvious never fucked an ass or a virgin. Or the dick is super tiny

Great story ...

Not really much of a story.

Not very good at all. Try harder next time.

Reminded of the first episode of my name is Earl, were he's telling his life story, but over all it was 2 or 3 out of 5

This story deserves six stars. I am waiting for chapter two !

Great for a quick erection...wish it was longer.

I felt it was a little bit rushed.....no girl is THAT silly, but nice thought.

Too far fetched