All Comments on 'Uncle Ian's Visit'

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prop69prop69over 5 years ago
Needs some work

Fucking her uncle after 3 hours?

Not very plausable

Dimmu_BorgirDimmu_Borgirover 5 years ago

How does an uncle visits *her* lonely niece?

falcon69wlfalcon69wlover 5 years ago
not bad for a first try...

It could use a little more background and some editing, but not bad for a first story... lots of opportunity for additional chapters..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Tasting

Would love to read about him smelling and tasting her asshole!

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