All Comments on 'Uncle Mervyn Pt. 01: Michelle'

I appreciate all the detail from her hair to the body! Makes it more live and we can actually picture the character please do this for future stories!

love the story

More please!

Thanks very much for your kind comments - good to see that this story was liked so far, especially as it's my first story, so I'm still getting into the swing of things. Good to see that I'm generally on the right track. I'm currently working on part 2 of Uncle Mervyn's story - where the lovely young Michelle falls deeper into his lecherous clutches.

Wonder when the next chapter is gonna be posted

How long before part 2 comes out

Good but don't have it becoming too much him controlling her or having her distressed, too much of that about

please let there be a pt 2 and would love to see her get humiliated in it

Part 2 Please

Mmm that was hot an love to read more .