All Comments on 'Uncle Thomas and His Nieces Ch. 01'

I can't wait to see your next chapter!!! Great introduction to the characters. I love it!!!

Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Love your writing style

this is great please continue - love the ass grabbing/fondling. devious uncle!

Sounds like Uncle Tom should try fucking Lizzie's tits for sure and probably Cassie's tits too. I love tits and nipples. They just make me want to fuck.

Good start. I’d like to hear more from his wife who seems happy with the potential of their nieces for sexual play. The multiple grammar errors stop the flow too much. Most would be picked up by the grammar check in Word or Google Docs; please run Ch2 through one, or get an editor. Keep writing.

There are a lot of grammatical errors.