All Comments on 'Uncle Thomas and His Nieces Ch. 03'

"I don't know, uncle...my parents said I shouldn't ever show my body to anyone..."

I click my tongue, damn her parents for being so conservative. I thought over my plans before something clicked inside my head, "Lizzie, I have done this with my wife a lot. She says that I have amazing hands, trust me. We can stop anytime you want."

Her blue eyes flicked around the room, and there was no one around. My wife was at work, Elizabeth was somewhere in the city and it was just me and her.

As you can see from the above sentences the writer mentioned Elizabeth's name twice when the writer should have referenced Cassandra in the last sentence.

Once I got over the writer's incompetence I did finish reading the story and the scene in the pub was bot ludicrous and unimaginative. What the writer failed to mention is that this pub is also where his wife and her lover were having lunch and that "moan" was from the uncle's wife.

Hope to see the next part soon.

One star. And frankly not worth that.

I want more of a build up. I want more like how it happened in the dressing room. More lingerie stuff with the open crotch panties and photoshoot, maybe in a public place or a car

So hot! Ready for the next and Cassie.

Wish this would get updated