by amasterfound
You know how to write hot, sexy stories. This one had all the detail beautifully done. Great job!
It's very HOT and STEAMY! Loved it! Of course, I'm rather biased.
Great story, very hot and sexy. Please write more like this.
Certainly made me play with myself. Thanks
Julie
i think you need alot of help this last section of chapter 4 had no life in it all you should work on that theres not chareter feel you should seek help from a mental instituion this collection seems more like male dominace and rape more that anything
You need to stop with the every other word CAPITALIZED. It makes your story impossible to enjoy reading.
What kind of pathetic peice of shit master allows one of his cunts to fuck other men?