All Comments on 'Uncle's Favorite Niece Ch. 04'

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msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Incredible!

You know how to write hot, sexy stories. This one had all the detail beautifully done. Great job!

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXalmost 19 years ago
Excellent work, baby!

It's very HOT and STEAMY! Loved it! Of course, I'm rather biased.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Stuff

Great story, very hot and sexy. Please write more like this.

Certainly made me play with myself. Thanks

Julie

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fabulous

Please do more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great!!!

LOVED this story and can't wait for more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

i think you need alot of help this last section of chapter 4 had no life in it all you should work on that theres not chareter feel you should seek help from a mental instituion this collection seems more like male dominace and rape more that anything

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Omfg

You need to stop with the every other word CAPITALIZED. It makes your story impossible to enjoy reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nope

What kind of pathetic peice of shit master allows one of his cunts to fuck other men?

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Ok, but use a lot of rewriting and editing.

Anonymous
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