All Comments on 'Uncloaked'

Hi....I'm a first time writer on Literotica. This is my first attempt ever at erotic writing. Any comments you might have, positive or constructive criticism, please do post them here. I look forward to your encouragement and to learning and exploring more in writing erotica! :)

That was amazing!! It was hot but sweet at the same time. But mostly hot ;)

Oh god that was good... Write more!

Such Hot Stuff !! I could see it happening in my head. It's just wrong that I also know you personally =p

- Your Chef D.

that was fucking brilliant. No shit. Woof!!

I look forward to more from you.

I could barely wait fr page 2 to load :) love ur style.. Especially loved th para on th love of giving a blow.. Waiting to read more.