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Maybe it can be attributed to their anima guiding them, but it is another level of sad that Chirp knows how to tend to starving people. Poor Chirp.

As for Ember, there is nothing wrong with having fantasies when you know you won't act on them. And considering how the magic bound them, it might not be possible for him to not have those fantasies. It does beg the question though, of whether Ember still has a dormant she/her pronoun within him that he could bring to the surface for his Lapis.

That three legged joke had me rolling:)

@9 Nice chapter. I think I'll repost this. Also, if completely unplanned, what a happy little accident ^.^

Bahubali meets erotica. Great attempt. Nice storytelling.

The events in the chapters themselves were planned out, but me accidentally fucking up the posting order was not! ^///^

@Anonymous

Yes, this story is heavily inspired by Bahubali part 1 and 2, the greatest films I had ever watched (up to this point)

Great King Bahul?, The statue rising scene?, The great resemblence between the Reagent and Bhallaldev?...Man.. didn't you were a Bahubali fan!! That movie just gives me an adrenaline rush every time I watch it...Great story!!..The rising scene was very well narrated and as soon as you mentioned the 300 yards statue, everything just clicked!! Awesome!

Yes, I'm a HUGE fan of Bahubali - the film Hollywood would make if they weren't HUGE FUCKING COWARDS!

Is there a reason you switched from 3rd person omniscient narrator to 1st person? At first I thought it was about Ember tapping into the void, but when that wasn’t really addressed, I thought perhaps I would ask.

Enjoying this series a lot btw. I‘ve read several of your works, and I think you have a nice voice.