All Comments on 'Uncontrollable.'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Yeah, that needs a second part where she gets preggo and has more angry sex with him.

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 4 years ago

Fantastic, please keep going

Omart57Omart57about 4 years ago
She started

it and then gets upset when he finishes it. Girls, gotta love em! Nice story, loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
TOO FUNNY!

I hope he knocked her up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
A good Start

Nice short sis fuck. What are you going to do to her next

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Made my pussy wet reading it. 👅

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

But rushed.

She should have spent much more time playing with and teasing his cock and balls in the beginning. With lots of dialog about what she was doing? Is that the way he liked it? Should she do it faster? Slower? Harder? Softer?

How about a little lubrication while jerking him?

Too rushed to move ahead too fast.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

a little too long, I liked it up to where he caught her in the laundry room. should have stopped there.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Not very realistic, but hot none the less.

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