All Comments on 'Under a Cold Sky'

by JimBob44

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great

The trucks were parked on the shoulder on I-10 in B.R. for 3 days because of below freezing temps and lack of snow and ice removal equipment.

Boyd Percy

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Rubbish

Terrible writing. Hot even a vague sniff of beleivability.

And Microsoft spellchecker isn't an editor* as you extensively prove.

* There's a clue in the name!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story

Every one got some thing

mordbrandmordbrandover 5 years ago
Enjoyed the tale

Tyvm

korba76korba76over 5 years ago
Another slice of the brown side...

... of the Apple that is Life in America.

Thank you for a little trickle of trenchant, flowing, reality in a flood of mediocre sludge....

Most of us DO NOT need a 2x4 to get the drift of what's going on...

Thank you for your work....

D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
another gritty story

typical JB 44 serving!

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