All Comments on 'Under Her Thumb Ch. 02'

I loved your story, but it much too long-winded. It takes far too long to eventually reach the crux of the story. Keep on writing.

Absolutely love your style of writting and NO, it is not long winded. The way you have given a build up and insight into the characters lives makes it a much better read. Anyone wanting a quick wank read should by a mag.My only critisism is stop making us wait so long for the next installment, it's driving me crazy ha ha.The cabin interior and surroundings are described so well that i felt like i was in one of the chairs with them, enjoying the heat from the fire. Keep the chapters coming, good work

Five Stars. Please don't have us wait to long for the next chapter.

Keep going......

That your stories and way of telling them are refreshing. I have thoroughly enjoyed them and can't wait for more.

Keep going I like the locals. BC Res.

PLEASE keep the story going! Things are just getting good!

Please, please keep more coming! I want to see how this ends quite badly.

Keep up the amazing work haha

This story is just so damn hot...Don't stop now! Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

This story screams to be continued. A 5 star story. Thanks

But Dom you are KILLING it right now with this story! Seriously. It is outrageously hot! You've got to keep this series going. Ty for sharing.

Very well written and amazingly HOT ..... Yes please continue as Daddy learns how Ginny's body is and how nasty & hot she really is plus his daughter wanting to do him too ...... thank you !

very good well written one of the best stories I have read on this site

This is a hot daddy/daughter fantasy that so makes my pussy wet and keeps my clit tingling! PLEASE continue!

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He smiled as a thousand ideas ran through his head; he had every intention of giving Beata and Ginny their best Christmas ever.

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Two horny girls, a cabin in the mountains, snowed in with no interruptions, having to sleep together at night to stay warm… think I have a few ideas too ;)

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Ginny then turned to Steve and said solemnly, "Thank you Daddy, I love you so much... You've made me the happiest girl in the whole world," she smiled then and said, "well, maybe except for Bea, I think she's pretty happy too." They all laughed and cuddled together in front of the fire.

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Totally did not see that all coming! I almost got a few tears in my eyes too :). For a few minutes there I actually wanted to be somebody's daddy… ahem, then I came to my senses, heh. It's a sweet Christmas dream story though!! Going all Miracle on 34th Street on us! Hehe

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They topped quarter sized, cone shaped areolas, their profile clearly seen through her thin top. Gin's nipples were extremely hard; drilling into Steve's other side.

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Those are the best!! I love those light pink cones with hard pokey nipples!! I could suck and nibble on those for hours!!

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'Those girls are so fucking beautiful,' he thought, 'God, I want to touch them so bad... From the way they were talking in the loft, you'd think they'd welcome it.' He shook his head violently, and whispered to himself, "Don't be a fucking idiot... just mind your shit."

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Don't be so fucking stupid, you are minding your shit!! When you have two girls telling each other that you make their pussies dripping wet, it usually means…. You have two hot girls that have wet pussies for you, ROFL.

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Careful not to push his luck too far, Steve allowed his hand to slide a little farther down onto Ginny's firm bum cheek, giving it a slow, gentle squeeze. 'Hell,' he thought, 'if she wakes up, hopefully she'll think I'm still asleep... what can they say?... they're the ones that climbed into my bed, I didn't ask to be put in this position.' That was his theory anyways.

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Wow! He's finally getting his head out of his ass!! I had no doubt that the girls would sneak into daddy's bed though! :)

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Steve just laid his head back and closed his eyes for a moment to think. 'Wow... I can't believe that just happened... God I love these girls... I just hope they don't kill me if they find out about this.' He shook his head and looked up to the ceiling with a long, confused sigh. "That was the most amazing thing that's ever happened to me," he whispered to himself quietly

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...hell, I'm with him! Lol ;)

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"Let Beata be the good little girl... I just want to be your dirty little whore. I'll do anything you want me to Daddy." With that, she slowly sucked his hard, dripping cock into her little mouth.

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Fuuuuuuuuuck!! ;)

….wow!! That was an awesome chapter! ...just wow!

Love the line by line comments, makes the effort to write them seem worth the work. Glad you getting a kick out of my stuff.. Read on Dude... :)

Cheers,

Dom.

Totally ridiculous, do yourself a favor and read fatherlyneed. These girls are such useless bimbos, yikes! Steve was unnecessary.