All Comments on 'Under His Spell'

Great conclusion. Scene was set nicely, leading up to an erotic moment. That subsided, but built up again. And again I was left wanting to read more of the masturbation scene. But the disappointment didn't last long, because the encounter in the bedoom got very steamy. Several delicious phrases made my cock twitch.

I enjoyed the progression from pussy licking to cock sucking, then the fuck in the way you described it was hot.

And then, of course, that wonderful twisting conclusion which, while not a graphic description of female masturbation (which I'd longed for earlier) made up in a big way for its omission.

Wonderful story. I was completely taken in until the end. Had me hard from start to finish.

Is this like a ghost story?

It is an uncanny dream story where the readers are free to use their own interpretation. ;)