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Cincy58Cincy58almost 4 years ago
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Thanks for sharing, I really enjoyed..

rightbankrightbankalmost 4 years ago
nice begining

I'm hoping to learn more about them

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great start

Hoping there’s more to this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Nice

You wanted comments.......

I think Brooke's concerns about Jake weren't developed in the beginning. Yeh she said he had this bad boy image, but why? Too many tatts wasnt enough for me. He needed more bad boy - a big Harley, lots of bad visitors at all hours, too many loud parties.

Also i may have missed it, was there an age difference?

The_PedantThe_Pedantalmost 4 years ago
Tattoos -YUK.

Very lower class, being tattooed!

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 4 years ago
I liked the "drugs suspicions" sequence.

I expected them to be grank and fonk...or some similar

uber healthy rare foodstuff?

Nice surprise.

Like You.

If "all around" ever gets you to Music City,

I don't cook...but we have some very nice restaurants! :+))

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Chemicals

Someone has been watching too much Food Babe, what with “ingredientes you can’t pronounce”. The problem with most diets is not what the additives are, but what goodness isn’t in them. if I give you the list of ingredients in an apple, you wouldn’t be able to pronounce most, and it will include arsenic, by the way.

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

*****Excellent storytelling and very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

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