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Click hereSkye crossed the distance between us in three graceful strides, her stockings allowing her to glide up to me without making a sound. Her arms wrapped around me in a hug as she turned her head to the side, resting it against my chest.
"Don't worry, I'll keep her away from mom. Thank you for putting up with her tonight. With both of us."
I used my free arm to return her hug, trying not to spill my bowl of cereal in the other.
"It's no big deal. We all gotta let loose once in a while."
She leaned up on her tip toes and gave me a kiss on the jaw. Her lips seemed to linger against my skin just the tiniest bit longer than they should have. Just long enough for me to wonder if she was dragging the kiss out longer on purpose or not. Then she slipped past me, graceful as a cat, and moved back toward the staircase.
My eyes stayed locked on the bottom curves of her tight looking ass peeking out from beneath her shirt as she ascended the stairs and disappeared from view. I went to my room, locked the door, and jerked off to memories of what I'd seen. If there was a hell, I no doubt that I was going there for sure based on the thoughts going through my head.
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End of Part One.
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Really sad to see a truelly talented amazing writer only create two epic stories and then go silent for 6 years. I couldn't imagine the amount of stories we'd have by now if they continued.a true loss.
"Under My Skin Ch. 01:" - Adolescent Older Brother, Ryan and Still Teenager Sister, Skye.
This Chapter 1, for me, is not deep enough into the the sibling's approaching probable incestuous (apparent) romance for me to make any truthful and/or reliable characterizations. Incest romance, and love, stories are difficult to write honorably; therefore, I'll withhold in-depth comment(s) until after I've read Chapter 02. I will say the roles of the character's has been lively, honestly written and appear sufficiently realistic to make a good incest romance and love story.
The boy is in deep trouble. Sister better be careful and keep some condoms handy for when she finally gets him to fuck her silly.
Good job and thanks for sharing this with us.
Hi Anomic, i wrote you three years ago, and then I (Boddasson) lost my password, contact to Literotica from Germany was impossible...not really a free country anymore.
Nevertheless: what a beautiful story, again! Please, try to keep writing. Especially in these hard times. Life in Germany really sucks (emergency laws, special police, undercover) Your stories help me to survive. To perceive, there is love, tenderness, beauty.
By the way, your writing style has improved since "All I Need".
Greetings from the old country!
I don't comment on too many stories on Literotica, unless it's deserved. And this is definitely a good read. You have a talent. Im enjoying your story, and look forward to future installments. Thank you and continued success.
Since this is not really porn I read both parts before commenting. I loved the whole rendition. the tension was superb and built right to the end. Install a sibling romance done at its best. thank you for your effort. It was enjoyment plus.
I love reading a build-up for romance and this is masterpiece.
I know it's an erotica but I expect it to be realistic in some ways to some degree.
Like how a brother reacts to his sudden feelings for his sister.
Or dialouges of characters are not like that they came from textbooks.
You do it good.
Drama is not drastic and the way you describe his lust is not too pervy.
It's a good incest romance build-up.
Your writing style is good.
It's clean. You write what should be written in right amount.
As I tell my students: Writing (style) evolves through influence. You read someone or someones whom you admired as authors and story tellers, and you adapted your style. "Before innovation comes imitation." Something fired you up and you wrote back to back chapters, and then something got in the way.
Thanks for the comment and your observations on my writing style. I don't know how I should feel about bits of my old writing style "creeping in and ruining" my new style. But it's something to think about. I hadn't noticed that I was writing in a different style, particularly, but these things evolve on their own, I guess. As for who I've been reading... I'm sad to say that it's all been non-fiction research materials. I haven't had much free time lately, to be honest, which is why it has taken so long to get the next parts of this story out there. I'm not publishing any more of the story until I have written it in full and it's taking a while, unfortunately.
Your writing style is much improved between this story and your first series, but I can see bits of your old ways creeping in, ruining the style you've adopted. None of the hall of fame authors write like this, so who have you been reading?
I gave u 5 stars enjoyed the first chapter looking forward 2 more
Fantastic story love the slow build up looking forward to the next part