All Comments on 'Under the Big Top'

by kinkynkazoo

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lod924lod924about 20 years ago
Take me to the Circus

Loved the story... Again, great job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Good one

This one was very intriguing. Liked the fact that this one took place at the Circus, the changes are always nice. You can really visualize this one. Take care. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great, but where was Krusty?

I enjoyed the background given by the author, and the dialogue was decent. Nice use of the blind fold and bondage techniques. Overall it was a story that pulled me in, aroused me, and made me want to visit the circus myself.

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