by Archer2050
I consider this story to be a Literotica classic. One of my favorites to read. Always a pleasure.
OMG WOW!!! SOOOOOOOO HOT!
I LOVED IT!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS!
Very good story. I am getting so wet. I wish I was at the counter instead of her
This story was so hot and sexy, I came before the end of it. Loved it!
Please do another one like this one. It made me so horny and I was playing with my pussy and tits the entire time I read it.
My nipples are still hard and my pussy is still dripping from this story....made me feel as though i was the one standing at the counter....yum
Great work, keep it up
well this is what i call real erotic story... really really hot with a touch of adventure to take u off the edge ... more please
This was so hot, sexy and dangerous, I was almost there with her - more please!
This is so good, I can read this over and over again and not get bored by it, very good job keep it up
Finally, I found a story that was almost custom made for my liking. It's as if the author picked my brain, so erotic yet dangerously sexy and captivating. Loved it, look forward to more stories along the same vein.
Yeah that was an awesome story, if thats what your capable of, keep writing!
Archer:
This was a fine tale. Forget Paul Anonymous. Some people forget that a) This is Literotica and b) IT'S A STORY!
It was well written. It was sexy. Finally, It was humorous. Well Done and Thank You! Ronnie W.
Nonconsent my butt! They had phone sex and Alana kissed her at the end, so obviously it wasn't nonconsent. She was simply hesitant to admit that she liked her best friend like that. it's not an easy thing to admit.
Keep up the awesome work, Archer! This story made me EXPODE!
Sincerely,
a bi female from rhode island
Archer2050, this was great! Beautifully well written. Well done!
I don't see how anyone could consider this nonconsent. It was a really nice and unfortunately brief sexual encounter. I would've like to see some afterplay, but that's the only negative thing I can think to say about it.
Keep up the good work.
paul, whoever you are, you need to loosen up... it was a hot story, & far more in the "lesbian" category than the "non-consent" category! personally, i though it was a sexy scenario, i love the idea of trying not to let on that you're being brought off in a semi-public setting ;) good work...
Can you say "Non-consent, Oral rape" she doesn't even like her friend or she wouldn't have done that when she did it. Alana was letting it happen because she was trying to get some more business for THIER company. If Alana would have stopped her then the man would have taken his business some where else..
Paul
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