All Comments on 'Under the Hill Ch. 02'

I did not rate this story cause I wasn't sure on how to rate it, I will say it was kind of off the wall and I had some trouble following the story cause of errors in grammar.It is not a story I would read again. Get you a proof reader and maybe that will help with the ratings you get.

I found this story to be interesting enough to keep me reading. I found myself confused a bit and wanting to get back to a direction in the story that could let me know what was going on. I can't say I have ever found a story quite like this. Normally if I was confused I would walk away. I liked it, then again I didn't.