All Comments on 'Under the Influence'

by Schaka

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Most excellent!!

10+++++ for this one, great job!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
great story...except

My wife is 66, 5'3" 128#, no grey, great complexion, and gets a lot of looks from men half her age

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Identity crisis

MIL's name changed halfway through the story. Good story as a whole. Still need to have someone proof-read your stories before posting.

krakbaknsak58krakbaknsak58about 6 years ago
Excellent

Definitely needs a chapter two. Loved the story, and how it panned out.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This one is one of the best you have written. Every singke parte. Just a little naughty and lewd touch about the false teeth. Adorable.

Ozgood13Ozgood136 months ago

I was hard the whole time reading this. Keep writing.

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