All Comments on 'Under the Knife Ch. 01'

The story is very nice but it seems to lack destination, which keeps it perfectly alligned with Hannah's feelings and maybe those of Eden as well (she's a bit more difficult to assess). I loved the feeling of floating.

That's a fair comment Cindy, thanks. Hannah has been the focus of a series of my stories, but I'd like to get to know Eden a little better too, so maybe this is the start of something? The story ends abruptly but Life is often like that and I like to keep my characters and their situation real. Thanks for reading

Well hello again, Hannah! I have to say, the tropics has more appeal to me than the Arctic. I didn’t like Hans as a nickname, though. It sounds like a Danish man. I loved “tipsy tart” and am now tempted to write a story with that phrase in it. Too bad their holiday was cut short like that. Maybe they can pick up where they left off later?

Great story of love and friendship that goes beyond be usual offerings of sexual pleasure.

Such beautiful writing. Thank you.

Really well done.

A 1000 words paint a picture :) You describe everything so beautifully and picturesque!