All Comments on 'Under The Right Moon Ch. 02-03'

There are so many directions to go with this story. Too much fun to stop now. I would love to see what happens next.

This story is so fun, I hope that isn't the end... The possibilities are endless. Hope another installment is in the works... Please!

I would like to see this continue. My one thing is the editing needs to be tightened up just a little bit more. Some of the words aren't used in the correct tense or they are switched around. But otherwise, very enjoyable.

Oh my lord please update soon. I keep on checking to see if you've been back, but alas woes the shame. When you're able to I'm sure I'm not the only one hoping for a new chapter or 2....shucks perhaps 3. God loves a trier aye.

All the best.

What a well put together story. Can't wait to read more. How about doing a book series. Don't think can get enough of these characters any time soon.

Is there to be more of this story line? Or, is it just my wishful thinking?

absolutely wonderful, beautiful writing style and hot descriptions. Please continue, can't wait to see Hope's reaction. :]

Please don't stop here. Tell us what happens after this.

and soon!

This is one fantastic story. You must keep writting, Gavins character is so kool. If only all males could be so open with their feelings. I will definately be adding you also to my favourite authors list so....bravo, bravo, keep up the great work!

Ok! You've got my interest your going on my favorites list so now I need the next chapter. Swelteringly Hot!!! Great job.

great story so far i hope you don't wait to long to add more and i mean lots more to this story.. it really is a great one.. thanks so much for sharing it with us.. can't wait for more.

im realy enjoyn da story so far,keep up da gud work,im lukn foward 2 da nxt chaptr.TN

I was so glad to see another posting...please continue and update soon :)