All Comments on 'Undercover Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Enjoyable

story,and the sexual part was different from the usual shag at the back of the Horse and Jockey or in the car park of the Swan Hotel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
To betray or not to betray, that is the question?

Sandra is not stuck between a rock & a hard place, she is stuck with the choice of betraying her ex or betraying Pritak, the panderer extraordinaire. There SHOULD be no choice. Pritak should be either 'taken down' or killed, so she should just be seductive enough to seduce ex. She knows he could bury a knife in her & claim he was 'protecting' his source but will he? She's in deep shit & her choices are between shittIER & shittiEST!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Thoroughly Enjoyable

What would most guys do if they got the chance to shaft - literally- their ex; especially after the way she abandoned them. An interesting storylibe, looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Neither Danny nor Sandra can be sure whether the other is undercover or is a dirty cop.

I don't see why the fact Sandra fucked some senior officers compromised them more than it did her.

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