All Comments on 'Undercovers Detective Ch. 02'

Loving Frank and Alex characters. Mike is going to be the evil force. Engrossing story. I'm hooked after just two chapters.

I enjoyed the story once i figured out the point of view shift.

I like the switching POV. You do it well. Your characters are defined as the story progresses as it should be. I hate it when authors give a list of vital statistics. eg, 5 foot 3 with double Ds.

Looking forward to more chapters.

This is a great chapter 2 for your first story! I like how you heat up the relationship between Frank and Alex -- and how cute to do that in a stopped elevator! Hopefully they can continue this at Frank's place or Alex's place, and can actually undress each other and explore those sexy bodies. I agree with the anonymous of Chapter 1: give Frank some sexy chest hair -- he deserves a gal like Alexis!