All Comments on 'Underneath'

You lost me as soon as I saw the word "you".

As a male, I cannot put myself in the story as a female.

Why some writers still insist on using this point of view baffles me.

Pleasant story. I'm not so keen on the first person pov though.

For those bothered by the POV, I totally understand and I should've added tags to make that clear. This originated as a commission so the second-person was directed to that person.