All Comments on 'Undiscovered Countries'

some parts felt a bit too technical, especially the calculations... but still, a great story and "pulls" the reader "deeper" : P

Sequel is coming, in about 1 week. Sincerely, hammingbyrd7

but the emotional involvment seems to be moving a bit fast....even drinking each others piss, 12 days is a bit quick to be considering someone as "wife/husband"

I can't wait the read the next part. I really needed a good, long, interesting story as a distraction, so I turned to you. I'm glad I hadn't "used up" all your stories yet.

200 dollars for lunch? That's it? I've spent that much at restaurants much less fancy than what you described. My lawyer friend took his wife to a restaurant for their anniversary and spent more than that on the WINE. Beyond that, I was thoroughly disturbed, good job I guess? If thats what you were shooting for...

Anyways, you should probably read less Stephen King :)

GREAT STORY TOO BAD YOU COULDN'T COME UP WITH AN ENDING!

Hurry with the next chapters. Very intrigued to see where you go with this.

The next chapter is already here folks. Been here for some years actually, see;

"Life In The Tesseract."

This was posted 06/18/04

:)

It is a unique idea for a story and I found it interesting.

However, I found the two characters to be largely one-note. They had the same feel, were basically the same personality. This is a pet peeve for me, where different people talk the same way, say the same types of things. I want to see different "styles" in the various characters.

I'll read on (Life in the Tesseract) and see how it goes...

Never use that word again in a story.

And they break down and drink each others piss, WTF man, terrible story 1*

Very strange story. I wonder what happens next?

And i thank you.

That satisfies my hunger for the surreal,

and descent into character development.