All Comments on 'Undressing'

Very pleased to see you're still writing.

I like this piece. Letting another person indulge themselves by undressing you however they desire can be very erotic, and your straightforward descriptions of her, and then his, actions capture convey that feelng well.

"She was much smaller than him, could just touch the tip of his chin with her nose." --aaaww best height description ever.

You got into the loving details of something a lot of us married folks take for granted now. Really beautiful piece.

I enjoyed your story, please consider do more with this lighter touch. Perhaps two men the next time. One uncircumcised and the other circumcised.

Great story! Sensual, sexy and beautifully, sensitively written. Lovely stuff...and 5 Stars!

I can appreciate the beauty of your vision. A single moment in time. A loving couple undressing.

Whether this is impactful, or memorable, is a different matter.

Probably too small an experience for that. Like a delicious apple you eat on beautiful summer afternoon. You forget the experience the very next day.

But maybe if there was more of it, or more like it?