All Comments on 'Unexpected Lust'

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William smythWilliam smythabout 10 years ago
Not yet....

Not much exploration of sexuality yet but it's a nice introduction.

So now that the scene has been set, let's get to it.

I'll give it a 4 in great expectations for more.

OOPS--I gave it a 5 by mistake. The next chapter better be good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
More to come?

Good beginning. I'll watch for the next installment.

minky_2001minky_2001about 10 years ago
Impatiently waiting!

Loved this introduction... can't wait for the rest of the story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
can't wait!

very well written ! it's nice to see good witing skills. i can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please create more to this story!

I enjoyed the beginning of this story. Please finish!

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