All Comments on 'Unexpected Offer Too Good To Ignore'

Loved it. Great fun story. 5stars.

The story was nice.

Bit why did you spoil it by letting the policeman use insider information for his personal benefit?

That make him a worse criminal than a guy paying for sex.

The story is solid enough to survive without this misstep.

Clever!

5

Ya got me smirking. Nice twist. Thanks for the story.

Great twist on a very common theme. Thank you.

Nicely done.

Warms the heart to see people so full of themselves face plant on the pavement.

Who gives a fuck if our mc made a buck on the assholes takedown. What a beautiful, clever story. Extremely well told in what looks like 750 words. MoreandMore, thank you for breaking the monotony of endless cuck crap on this site.

Loved it, M&M! Good one, Lol!

Great spin on this tale.

Cute. Maybe Vince will find something he isn't looking for in the slammer.

Loved it. I do like it when a plan comes together, even if it is a sperm-of-the-moment plan!

The bet made the story. Nice version. 5*

Nice twist.

good spin

Nice twist on a G. Anderson classic.

Sadly, in the real world, where the crooks run things, Vince would've been escorted to his hotel by the Chief of Police, and these two detectives would be back in the bag, "Riding a radio car in the Western." Five Stars.

HELL YEA! Loved it!

Rosenkavelier, you really need to get a fucking life.

Nice well written story

Fun and original.

Isn't that insider information? :) Loved it. 5 stars

Liked it,

Cute misdirection. 5

Bwahahaha!

Holy shit!!! Didn't see that coming. Did love the comment about the Life Alert bracelet. FOMCL!!! 5 stars Bob

Great slight of hand little story! Kudos for a grand-slam, moreandmore. You knocked this one outta the park! Congrats and thanks.

...and, I won't be tempted to read a few dozen alternate endings to the "famous athlete picks up a married woman for a cucking night of sex" story.

Beautifully done in 750.

Keep 'em comin'!

Lol !!

LOL GREAT

Like it,what an excellent way to take arseholes like him down.

At first, I thought it was just another February sucks copy. It was totally hilarious. LOL! Five stars.

Roflmfao 🤣🤣🤣 brilliant just brilliant BardnotBard

Super clever!

Beautiful!

Another fun read, I don’t know how you keep doing it