All Comments on 'Unexpected Submission Ch. 01'

So steamy... I was wet the moment he asked her for her panties. Ive always wanted to be played with in public, having others watch ...so hot. I'm still squirming!

That was so incredibly hot. I agree with sassysuzaz... As soon as he asked for her panties the whole tone of the story shifted, becoming electric with anticipation and lust. Well written, imaginative, and graphic. Most definitely 5 stars. Looking forward to chapter 2!

Very erotic and hot!

From the moment he asked for her panties, i couldn't read fast enough!!

Looking forward to the next instalment eagerly.

5 stars!

now THAT was a blazing-hot story, and i cannot wait for the next chapter!

amazing work. 5 stars and please type fast! ;-))

I've never had the pleasure of reading your previous story, but I see you have an impressive list of high scoring chapters and if they are anything like this one, they are deserving. I'm gonna try to find time to catch up next weekend, but in the meantime, great job with this chapter and I look forward to the next installment. Will you be posting it in BDSM? I see you bounce some and I don't want to miss it.

~LB

I really liked how she got to explore her submissive side. Look forward to additional chapters in their journey!

I really enjoyed this first chapter. Great job on the writing!

MastersWench

Great story. Love to suspense and dominate.

I agree entirely on his out on life, whatever consenting adults do is their own business and nobody else’s, 50 Shades was a steaming pile of crap and far too many people seem to assume that BDSM is about treating someone like scum, slapping them about a bit and then getting themselves off.

Loved this intro, it was surprisingly fast paced and very very sexy.

Looking forward to seeing where this leads. Thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)

Some wisdom and theory then boom! Time to jump. All the overthinkers out there can relate.

Impressive. I like it, althpugh more realistic if he kept the sex scene till they got back to the hotel

Premise OK.

But sex is simply too automatic. Too mechanical.

Too much pain and not enough teasing.

Two stars.

fuck the rest of the comments, I loved it. This author writes erotica like i want it to be written and he makes me cum, only a few are that good 5*

Great story!

Tess (uk)