by Joanmcarthy
Jeez. 33 chapters of the same crap. Give it a rest. Great new interesting characters.
-100 stars
Thank you once again. I enjoyed this chapter as much as any!
I look forward to the next instalment.
However you seem to be having trouble maintaining it.
Must be getting near time to reach Aussie home town.
Keep them coming, we'll keep reading and enjoying the old guy's adventures.
I love this storey one of the best, the sex is fantastic, if I could make a suggestion it would be to expand a bit more on the locations and the daily iteractions with the people of the locations, more of the travel doco, as these locations are fantastically exotic and erotic. You missed out Tonga!
I’m so looking forward to the rest of your storey.
Waikiekieboy.
The first time a chapter ending with essentially a to be continued paragraph I was slightly miffed. However, as I have read more of your chapters in this story I find I like them. They give me a foreshadowing of what’s to come and a desire to get back to the next installment. Now if I were reading these a couple of years ago knowing I could not just click the next one I might have been less enthused about them but I think I still like them
Still an excellent story. I like how the frank honest conversations reveal the back story and Insight into the thoughts and feelings of the various characters.