All Comments on 'Unexpected Valentine'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Enjoyed the story.... small suggestion.... in the beginning she has "green orbs", and by the end they had turned blue.

nixroxnixroxabout 2 years ago

5 stars - I really liked this story.

Although, it would have been a great start to a much longer story with them having more children and living happily ever after.

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
Very Entertaining Read****

I really liked the storyline. Thanks for sharing. P.S. someone better check on the baby!!

sparktjsparktjover 4 years ago

Nice, I found this very arousing. Well written too, with some little dirty details like the heavy insemination which I enjoyed.

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