by TornConflict
Enjoyed the story.... small suggestion.... in the beginning she has "green orbs", and by the end they had turned blue.
5 stars - I really liked this story.
Although, it would have been a great start to a much longer story with them having more children and living happily ever after.
I really liked the storyline. Thanks for sharing. P.S. someone better check on the baby!!
Nice, I found this very arousing. Well written too, with some little dirty details like the heavy insemination which I enjoyed.