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by GorgeousJimmy146

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patternflyrpatternflyrabout 4 years ago
Great stroy - looking for more, but...

Great story - good mental pics of what she (especially) was feeling / thinking - excellent!

Finding an editor to work with you would make your great storylines much smoother and less... bumpy... -- it'd make a better and more enjoyable read that way!

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im a outgoing positive woman who's in love with her man. everything I write is written is rhyme and I've never ever had a one night stand. my love with my family is close and its strong but my coyote is closer she's always been there for me even when I'm wrong.