All Comments on 'Unholy Inferno'

by Alainn

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
So . .

I was waiting for a line. Even an earth lake connection. I suppose partly that's the expectations your other subs have created. At least the word steel fitted the setting. As an aside Maybe just a Sheffield sensitivity, but it's history is suprisingly short. This was standard couple arrive at Hol chal.. . .it's been done over and better set by various others in print and text. Not sure of your original script but, I know this is first com, left as it is it is a slight on your usual sparkling quality and original approach. I'm left feeling we have only half the tale you intended.

Still across .06 to 10 you appear one of the site's special special talents.

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