All Comments on 'Unholy Pilgrim'

What is it that makes writers like you think anyone who goes to church is someone who needs to be brought out of their sexual bondage? The tags alone told me how stupid this story was. Therefore I wasted no time trying to read it.

Good one! I hope she comes back for more.

Perhaps Anonymous above me thinks perhaps too much while sampling the erotic wares on this site. For me I enjoyed this offering immensely. Intelligent dialogue, developing eroticism and then she melts and goes for what she wants. The sex was, if I may, very rushed. I would gave preferred it slower and more descriptive. Perhaps there is a round #2 and more time is taken by both. This was an easy 5, BTW.

Well written, I liked the descriptive narrative. Your story was very interesting and it held me. The religious angle has always intrigued me and writings in this vain that are done well hold my attention. Good stuff...

Technically well written, few errors. Lacks any emotion whatsoever, mechanical.

Trusting there will be another chapter.