All Comments on 'Unhooking Mom's Bra'

This is the worst story I have ever read

This is a brilliant idea for a story, the title alone is awesome. Your English is a little broken and needs a little work as the mistakes throw the reader straight out of the story and into editor mode.

With a little more work on your English and an edit this story would be compelling I am sure.

All the best

She would need to pay me back for my earlier oral work on her snatch, but would she let me fuck her pussy, or would she only want to give me a blow-job? I wanted to fuck her, I wanted to hold her tightly as the head of my cock was hitting bottom. I wanted to make her moan, give her an orgasm, and make her want my cock again, and often.

BRAVO BRAVO PLEASE WRITE THE STORIES PART BY PART

MRS KUNDAN GPARAKH

This is a nice story. If she is not yet satisfied, then there are others to satisfy her, in as many ways s she wants!

This is the best story of mom n son sex I found so far.

Very exciting! Continue the story ... You can then add another son?

I HAV A SAM INCIDENT !!

beatin my meat rite now!

i enjoyed reading the story through an Indian accent perspective.

The story was good but the fact that the authors english was pathetic was a real let down. Learn better english and write it again!

Loved it, very arousing...

its was simply mind blowing.... waiting for the next part eagerly.