All Comments on 'Unicorn Ch. 03'

This story is crazy hot and beautiful. This is a wonderful loving, sexy romp.

I love this so naughty like too much cream cake, you know you'll enjoy every bit of it, but you'll still make a mess in the end. Candy coated 5 🌟.

Very much love Lauren's journey of discovery between all things sensual, passionate and carnal, and the differences between each. The discriptive eroticism had my fingers often wandering to places warm and slippery. Five-plus stars for both the writing, and having me see them. ~M

As Andrea True Connection sang in 1976, "More, more, more, how do you like it...." Please continue to fan this fan's flames.

OMG!!! The writing is incredible. The story is a marvelous fairy tale. I love the characters. A magnificent read.

THANKS

Hard to belive that it just keeps getting better. I'm so in love with your writing.

More more more Pleeeeaaasssseeeee

Usually love your writing, but this one didn't do it for me. Not into "Daddy" or Trans. Well written though.

I’ve been waiting to do my ratings after I read the whole series, but I know this one is a five. A bit of a daddy fantasy and bi curious. Loved how u worked Lady in n managed things with her. So glad Mr Preston both swallows and takes it up the ass. I was going to b so disappointed if he didn’t. I don’t need a lot of bi, but if it pops in I like it.

Great story, however I felt the daughter/mother and daddy/daughter parts didn't belong - they felt forced and kind of ruined the flow, especially for Virginia's party.

I Loved every sensual bit of this masterfully written story.

Alice in Wonderland!