All Comments on 'Uninvited Ch. 01'

Not sure how this is a Chapter 1; it feels pretty complete to me. There isn't much else to go, given that finale.

By popular demand I wrote two more 'chapters' (Literotica calls them that but each is a complete story really) and they should be uploaded soon.

Great chapter 1. *****

I put down 5 stars and went to get some coffee.

Up, dude. Love this series. Have read it more than once and will likely read it again. Of course it helps that I've played a sh*tload of XCOM. 5 stars for you.

That last bit, I haven't laughed that hard in a while. Will definitely read again, and read the sequels. ^^

Finally, someone else who writes characters with non-human faces kissing! It's so rare and I loved it! The description of the ways that Vi is different from a human from Harris' perspective is one of the best parts of the story.

I've also read part 2 and half of part three and I'm looking forward to finished the series when I have the time.

A SCALE of 1-10!

Delightful story. Staggeringly sexy and weirdly romantic. What a cliffhanger too! I Zmust read more!

PS I really want Vi to take his submissive hu-mannish boi-pussy with her tail! Such a pretty candy-assed, little fuck-toy for that powerful, Dominant Lamia Warrior!!