All Comments on 'Unity and Destiny Pt. 09'

at its best. Thank you a lot for sharing.

Much thought and skillful work has been put into this story, and it must be frustrating to see how little appreciation comes back to the author.

Many thanks for this fine tale.

Thank you so much for continuing this gift of awesome work.

Hope you have another installment of a later time.

I much enjoyed this story.

Thank you all for your comments! Glad you enjoyed the story. I have plenty of ideas for future developments in this universe, but not enough yet to start writing. For now I'll continue work on other stories and let things percolate in the background.

Love the world and characters you built and hope they inspire my future films and projects. I look forward to any future writing from you in this IP or others

I've waited some weeks to read this final chapter and I was not disappointed, to say the least.

Thank you for sharing this story with us, may you find harmony in your own way

Thank you again for your comments; they mean a huge amount to me (and I imagine any of the writers here). Ideas for the third book are slowly coming together. I even wrote a prologue that makes me want to read whatever comes next, whenever the daydreaming author gets around to writing it.

I really enjoyed reading these two books. The characters are very engaging and the plot is fascinating to watch unfolding. I particularly liked their solution to their current sexual incompatibilities; sharing with loved ones to fulfill needs the partner can't meet, especially without any sneaking around. We could all stand to learn from their example.

I look forward to reading more about Esther and Javier and anything else you might choose to write. Thank you for writing and sharing these stories.

Thanks for sharing your vision, imagination, and writing skills. Great story, style, and well integrated erotica. I hope you will publish more novel length sci-fi.

If you find the story you want to continue please do

just a really good story. And I start all over again on "The Strangeness within".

I am looking forward to part 3.

So confused about the ending. The epilogue was rushed without a clear finality. That said, awesome read. Thank you!!!

A story on the level of Dune. Truly a masterpiece.

This was an epic read. Challenging to follow in parts - which made it all the more compelling. The plot and character detail was simply amazing. Rockchaser can be proud of a job very well done indeed..I’d do feel the wrap could have been a little more detailed and better thought out, with perhaps a page or two more leading us to the conclusion (or hopefully, the conclusion for now….).

I love this sequel! The first book was very good but this one is great. Really imaginative, compelling character arcs and plot line..... Such good storytelling.... Thank you! Are there any further adventures planned in this series?

Awesome! I felt like the cooldown was way too short though! Would have just loved to have some time with them, after the tension had passed.... Some joyful relatings....

These books are amazing! How are they only published here??? I couldn't find them anywhere with Google besides here... Is there an author name I can search to find more of your work? These are so good! They need to get out to the world!