All Comments on 'University 01 - A New Beginning'

This has great potential for a series about Amy and Jo's university adventures. Looking forward to more.

You spoiled a great story with poor grammar. For example ... "Yes i agree that makes perfect sense."

It should be Yes (I) agree ...

Otherwise a good story and look forward to reading more

Yes more of the story to come. Grammar is my weakness, as when i attended schools/college it was during a time it was unfashionable to teach in any depth. I am more used to writing business documents and not stories as such. And when i write business docs, i use a full version of Word, which checks grammar and spelling. Literotica has limited fields to enter stories and you really need to use Word and copy/paste across after checking.

......only a real shame, you felt the need to respond to the anonymous critics.

Personally, if they can't put their names to criticism, well, they're not worth the effort.

It's your story, your style, your grammar, done in a way to show your age, education, as you start life's long journey at Uni.

Be proud 🌈

I did think before i responded. Any feedback, provided there is a learning point through constructive criticism can be a positive. Does not mean I would always respond. Grammar can be a subject open to argument.

Never mind the grammar i didnt notice as i was enjoying a really Good story and i would like to read more of either the sisters or amy and jo

Swapping partners 1/2 way through sneeky and fun. Thank you for a good read

I really got into this, I thought it no ex a little fast, but gave it five star.

It was so plainly written and lacking in expression.