All Comments on 'Unlucky in Love Ch. 01'

Maybe a bit on the rough and dark side - or still ambiguous?

Anyway, enticingly told. Looking forward to more erotic relationship dynamics with Nick and Matt.

That was...interesting! Great to hear it from her perspective, good stuff.

You go to the trouble of fleshing out the characters, but you make them garbage people. It's weird, and not sexy.