All Comments on 'Unrehearsed'

One of the Hottest stories ever, no doubt about it. You're damn right you give this audience a night they wouldn't forget. And once word gets out, you'll have to repeat this for every performance. Oh, and twice on Matinee days. Seriously though, this was very well done. I felt like I was right there in the theater watching these actors myself. And I was just as hard, the whole time that they were. Thanks for this ***** plus story. MLF

So many words I want to say to you… You are taking my heart, and my mind. I am not sure how the play would continue, or whether. Please write more, explore further. Plz.

Wow.......just ...WOW!

You beautifully and skillfully sustained the sexual tension throughout the story (and in me) perfectly. I would perform with you anytime.

Wonder if Gwen is super pissed or very aroused? Will there be a second chapter to let us know if Louis felt everything our MC did - or is he just a stellar actor! I’m thinking he felt real feels by the way he gobbled that cock on stage!

Please write more and continue with this story. Very hot!

Thank you for this story! By the time it was over, I had to have an orgasm! I don’t believe I’ll ever get to experience M2M sex, but I would really like to try. At least I can kind of experience it through stories like yours! Please keep writing! You truly have a gift.

That is quite possibly one of the most incredibly erotic things I have ever read. Give us more!

Just wonderful. I felt every moment along with them. You couldn't quite tell what was real and what was just acting, and the audience watching with rapt attention added so much. I was so ridiculously hard reading this! So well done!