All Comments on 'Unrequited Love?'

Great story!! You should continue it at least one more chapter! I love the romance aspect and the hot sex aspect! Great writing!

Was it just another fantasy for both??? or reality???

no more chapters, just leave us to wonder

not enough emotion, it was too clinical, too 3rd person "historical". for me the dialog was flat. it seemed like a ok story.

This has to be my favourite of your stories. You wrote their uncertainties, their fantasies, their frustrations so well. Each character was just as they should be, and their metamorphasis at the end was almost perfect.

Millie

This could go 1-2 more chapters easily, as well paced as the initial chapter was it'd not be a stretch and it'd be enjoyable to picture it while reading it. Gotta love some simple happiness with some hope of erotic sex thrown in!

BRAVO!!