All Comments on 'Unresolved'

by Pilgrim

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cybrfuncybrfunalmost 18 years ago
Fantastic...MORE PLEASE!!!

Oh geez, so great and yet such a tease!!! I REALLY hope you continue this wonderfully written piece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Keep this story going..

Great job, the girls should definately hook up, this story deserves a part two.. Excellent story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
ZZZZZZZZZ...ZZZZZZZZZZZ...ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

Wake me when something is worth reading!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
really well written

really well written story. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I love...

the restraint, the longing, the uncertainty. That's such a turn on for me. The scene in the bathroom when they brush against each other.. so sexy! I wonder if learning how the story ends would spoil everything?

DaveAMDaveAMalmost 8 years ago
Part 2

Would love to read what happened next time they were alone!

redkissyredkissyabout 7 years ago
More please

I would love to read more chapters, please don't stop.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Very nice. Too bad there was never a follow up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oooh...more, please.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Cheating in the name of love; how romantic.

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